Thursday, March 6, 2014

(3/5 SWA) "Peer Review Follow-Up Script"


The peer feedback I received was helpful in terms of showing which areas I needed most revisions in. I didn’t know I had cited the names of my articles wrong in my paper, but now I know because my peer showed me what I need to do to fix it. The main points my peer edit pointed out was that I need to work on adding transitions in between paragraphs. Also my peer edit pointed out some needed revisions on my intro and conclusion so my paper will be tied together better. I will use most if not all of the recommendations made by my peer, mainly because most of the errors are things I would have caught myself if I took more time looking over the prompt more carefully.  

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